Wednesday, June 9, 2021

stockcar Car gear box

Stock Car gear box How does a gear box work ? firstly you need to know where all of the different Parts are meant to go. A stockcar gear box manual you Can use to explain where the different parts are meant to go. The parts go in different spots. The valves go into the fuel tank.

10 comments:

  1. Cool Willam it is really cool and descriptive.

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  2. it is very descriptive and I like how you said you need to know where all of the different parts are.

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  3. hi William this is a great piece of writing it really explains the stock car gearbox I thought there was a mini descriptive sentences as well as used words I just think you should had added a bit more writing to it tell me a bit more about it. but other than that it was absolutely great

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  4. Hi william I like how you picked something you know about and It looks like you've done it very well just next time maybe add a little more detail and puntuation.

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  5. nice work will I can tell where the gear box is now.I think that you could put on parographs and put in more detail.

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  6. Really good william but where are some of the places that the bits go and why do you have a capital letter in the middle of a sentence. I like that you have put where the valves go.

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  7. Hi William awesome piece of writing know I now alot about Stockcars. Maybe next time add a bit more writing next time but overall it is amazing.

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  8. Hi William. I think that you have a clear explanation is very clear and you also had "Firstly" and that is very good. But maybe you could add paragraphs. Anais

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